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Dontalion Somber's avatar

Absolutely brilliant. Thank you all for contributing to this fine piece.

Teyani Whitman's avatar

I’ve never joined in on something like this either.. great fun! And rather magical in the way the poem twisted away then turned back to the place where it began.

Does that sort of magic happen every time?

Marvelous!

Caravan Writers Collective's avatar

They’re usually pretty great. But this was a particularly spectacular one. Goes to show we have magic here in the Caravan! So glad you were part of it!

Julie Gabrielli's avatar

I’m marveling at that, too.

Paulette Bodeman's avatar

I've never participated in anything like this. Not only was it fun, but wow, it turned out pretty amazing!

Caravan Writers Collective's avatar

It did, didn't it?

Holy smokes, we have such a fantastic group of writers here!

Susie Mawhinney's avatar

Wowzah!! I'm gobsmacked by how this turned out! The last line... 🙌🏽

Ïmola Tóth's avatar

This turned out to be amazing!! I'm so glad to be able to participate in this with my little line. Some lines are just brilliant!

Caravan Writers Collective's avatar

We feel the same!! So glad you were part of this.

Julie Gabrielli's avatar

Wow! Amazing ripples of images echoing and stretching and contracting and turning in and unfurling back out. Like an animal stretching awake, then curling to sleep. How is it so coherent?? The cycle of a day? Smh

Caravan Writers Collective's avatar

Right?

We think it speaks to the coherence and magic of the group and all our wonderful, brilliant writers!

Phynne~Belle's avatar

Definitely the exquisitest in all the land of exquisiteness!